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HR Manager Cover Letter Example

Boards hiring a head of HR read for lower turnover, faster hiring, fair handling of hard cases and managers who can hold difficult conversations. This letter opens on a turnover result, explains what caused it and sets out how the writer would approach a growing food business.

Senior · 352 words · Last reviewed 4 November 2026 · 3 min read · How we write these

The job this letter answers

Head of HR, Bourne Valley Foods

Bourne Valley Foods is a family-owned maker of chilled ready meals with about 650 staff at three sites in Hampshire. It opens a fourth site next year.

  • Lead HR for a growing workforce across several sites
  • Reduce staff turnover and time to hire
  • Manage employee relations cases fairly and promptly
  • Coach managers on absence and performance conversations
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Folasade Adebayo

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4 November 2026

Mr Gareth Ellison

Managing Director

Bourne Valley Foods

Subject: Application for Head of HR

Dear Mr Ellison,

Staff turnover at Thames Valley Distribution has fallen from 28% to 19% in three years since I took over HR, and time to hire has dropped from 52 days to 34. I am applying to lead HR at Bourne Valley Foods as it grows to a fourth site, because that is the stage at which those two figures are easiest to lose.

Neither result came from one scheme. Turnover fell after we rebuilt induction, began stay conversations with people in their first year and made the pay review clear enough to explain on the shop floor. Time to hire fell when managers agreed role profiles before advertising and we interviewed within a week. I lead HR for 420 employees across two sites with an advisor and two coordinators, and we handle about 30 employee relations cases a year, each closed within the agreed time and none taken to an employment tribunal in three years. Each year I also run the pay and benefits review with finance inside a fixed budget, which keeps the pay conversation honest with staff.

Bourne Valley Foods is the kind of business where HR decides whether growth works. In my experience of shift work, people who leave tend to go in their first weeks, and the reason is more often the supervisor than the pay. That is why coaching managers on absence and performance conversations matters more to me than any policy. After updating our handbook with legal advice, I trained 40 managers in exactly those conversations. A family-owned firm opening a fourth site will need the same standard on every site, and I have spent fourteen years in people roles across depots and sites. On a new site I would put the first effort into its supervisors, before writing any new policy, because their first months set the turnover for years.

A first conversation could begin with the one-page format we use for stay conversations, which a supervisor can run without HR in the room. After that, the question I would most want to answer with you is where turnover is highest across your three sites today.

Kind regards,

Folasade Adebayo

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Paragraph by paragraph

  1. The opening

    Starts: “Staff turnover at Thames Valley Distribution has…”

    Opens on the two results the advert asks for, turnover and time to hire, then names the role with the employer's growth in the same breath.

  2. Your strongest evidence

    Starts: “Neither result came from one scheme. Turnover…”

    Explains the causes behind each result, which shows a board that the work can be repeated, and covers the advert's line on fair, prompt case handling.

  3. Why this employer

    Starts: “Bourne Valley Foods is the kind of…”

    Gives a judgment, drawn from the writer's own shift-work experience, about where turnover starts, links it to the advert's coaching line and to the employer's family ownership and fourth site, and shows senior thinking rather than a list of tasks.

  4. The close

    Starts: “A first conversation could begin with the…”

    Offers a concrete tool and one sharp question that shows how the writer would start, which suits a senior hire.

Why this letter works

  • Two results the advert asks for appear in the first sentence.
  • The second paragraph explains causes, so the results read as repeatable.
  • A view on where shift-work turnover starts, drawn from experience, shows senior judgment.
  • The close asks one question that a managing director will want answered.

How to write your own HR manager cover letter

  1. Explain what caused your turnover result, not just the percentage.
  2. Describe case handling by time to close and outcomes, in plain words a non-HR reader follows.
  3. Share one view about the employer's sector that shows how you think.
  4. Mention the size of your team and the sites you cover so the scope is clear.
  5. End with the first question you would want answered in the job.

Common questions

Can a head of HR letter run longer than a coordinator's?

Yes, up to about 400 words. Use the space to explain causes and judgment, not to list every duty.

Should a senior HR letter mention professional membership?

Put chartered status on the resume near the top. In the letter, mention it only if the advert asks.

Is it risky to give an opinion about the employer's sector?

Not if it comes from your own experience and is stated plainly. A considered view shows the board how you will think in the role.