Valentina Cruz
Scottsdale · valentina.cruz@example.com
4 November 2026
Ms. Dana Hollis
Managing Broker
Ridgeview Residential
Subject: Application for Real Estate Agent
Dear Ms. Hollis,
Closing 28 sales worth $14.6 million last year, with my listings selling in an average of 24 days, taught me which habits move a home. I would like to put them to work as an agent at Ridgeview Residential.
I have held an active Arizona salesperson license since 2023, and at Desert Ridge Realty my sales are split between buyers and sellers. Each listing is priced from recent sales, with professional photos booked before it goes live. New buyer inquiries get a reply within 15 minutes during working hours. My two open houses a month produced 11 buyer clients in a year. From offer to inspection to closing, every client gets a written timeline, so nobody has to guess what comes next.
Ridgeview's second office in Scottsdale is what drew me to apply. I already sell in Scottsdale and the nearby suburbs, and Spanish is my first language, so the clients your new office is opening for could negotiate with me in the language they think in. To build repeat and referral business, I send a quarterly market note to 40 past clients, and nine of last year's sales came from that group. Before I sold homes, I was a transaction coordinator. I handled paperwork for about 60 closings a year for six agents, and no closing was delayed for missing documents.
A sample client timeline and my latest market note, both in English and Spanish and with names removed, will come with me to any meeting you offer. Which neighborhoods should your Scottsdale office win first?
Sincerely,
Valentina Cruz