Kwame Mensah
Plymouth · kwame.mensah@example.com
4 November 2026
Ms Gillian Hartley
Branch Manager
Dartmoor Building Society
Subject: Application for Customer Service Officer
Dear Ms Hartley,
About 15 customers a week leave my counter at Tamar Vale Savings with the mobile app set up and working. Helping members do the same at Dartmoor Building Society, as a Customer Service Officer, is the job I am applying for.
I serve about 120 customers a day with deposits, withdrawals and payments, and I balance the cash drawer daily; if it is out, I find the cause before the branch closes. Identity and fraud checks are part of every large transaction, and I escalate anything that worries me to the supervisor. Every Friday I count the branch safe with a second person and sign the log.
Dartmoor's promise to keep all eight branches open while members move to the app is the reason I chose to apply here. Some customers want to bank on their phone and some want to hand cash across a counter, and the counter is where I help customers move to digital banking without pushing anyone. I also referred customers to the advisers, which led to 30 savings appointments in a year. My first cash job was at Avon Supermarket, working the till on busy shifts and resolving queries at the service desk.
A morning's trial on the counter at any of your branches would show you more than this letter can, including how I talk a nervous customer through the app for the first time. Saturdays and late shifts are no problem for me.
Yours sincerely,
Kwame Mensah